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Better or worse
Better 23%
Worse 0%
Please don't ever write a poem again 76%

Votes: 13

 A poem for you all -- Mark II

 Author:  Topic:  Posted:
Aug 04, 2002
 Comments:
Due to the overwhelming response I received to my last poem, I have decided to write a follow-up.

Constructive feedback is appreciated.

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by cheetah

If brains were fridges,
I'd be a washing machine.

If couches were potatoes,
I'd be a stick of celery.

If monkeys were bananas,
I'd be an opposable thumb.

If the world was an oyster,
that'd be really dumb.

       
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Innovative. (none / 0) (#1)
by The Mad Scientist on Sun Aug 4th, 2002 at 06:38:08 AM PST
Interesting use of ab-cd-ef-gf verse scheme.


My thoughts exactly, (none / 0) (#3)
by Martino Cortez PhD on Sun Aug 4th, 2002 at 09:45:51 PM PST
Perhaps this young lad could find a future career in Poetic Arts. I hear the demand for American poetry in Japan is growing by leaps on bounds.


--
Dr Martino Cortez, PhD
CEO - Martin-Cortez Financial Corporation
Copyright 2002, Martino Cortez.

Thank you mr cortez man sir (none / 0) (#7)
by cheetah on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 09:31:07 AM PST
My attempts at fusing poetry and anime have failed in Japan; and if I don't find work by tomorrow I will not be able to buy my mother her third house. Times are desperate. Do you have any immediate vacancies at your lucrative company?


In a word, (none / 0) (#9)
by Martino Cortez PhD on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 06:47:05 PM PST
yes


--
Dr Martino Cortez, PhD
CEO - Martin-Cortez Financial Corporation
Copyright 2002, Martino Cortez.

 
hmmm...... (none / 0) (#2)
by mrt76 on Sun Aug 4th, 2002 at 08:34:29 PM PST
I don't know why but I really like that poem. May I ask what inspired you to write it?
"...I'm in no mood for a freak show this afternoon..."

thank you sir (none / 0) (#4)
by cheetah on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 06:16:52 AM PST
My inspirations are numerous.
<p>
Firstly, I'd like to thank my producer, who created the opportunity for me to share my talent with the world. Thank you.
<p>
Secondly, Mum, Dad, without you this would never have been possible, I think -- this one's for you.
<p>
Lastly I want to thank the fans. You are the guys who make this happen. You guys rock.


 
Thats a great poem. (none / 0) (#5)
by Anonymous Reader on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 07:01:30 AM PST
Just wondering was it your intent for it to come off describing you as a rebel? I wrote poetry too but I am too shy to share it.


Don't be shy (none / 0) (#6)
by cheetah on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 09:27:16 AM PST
Clearly, you have read me like a book, and seen my rebellious intentions. This intuitiveness is a rare quality and makes for great poetry.

Rejoice in the worldwide stage presented to you. Share your poems. Be free to be who you want to be. Fight the system. Don't take "no", "yes" or "maybe" for an answer.


 
Reminiscent of... (none / 0) (#8)
by jvance on Mon Aug 5th, 2002 at 04:53:26 PM PST
...the "filler tracks" on Fishbone's "The Reality of my Surroundings."
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Adequacy has turned into a cesspool consisting of ... blubbering, superstitious fools arguing with smug, pseudointellectual assholes. -AR

 

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